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The Effects of Revisions (before and after)


Jacob H. Baugher IV

Fantasy/Sci-Fi Writing-story I’m submitting to the anthology.

Original writing. This literally came straight out of my head onto the page.

Carn looked up from sharpening his sword among his comrades. It was his fourth day on the battlefield at Brideon and so far nothing had happened. Carn was impatient. He had checked his weapons countless times, surveyed the battlefield twice, and oiled his chain mail. He could even see the enemy troops in their camp across the grassy plain of no man’s land. Why Can’t we just attack already and be done with it? he wondered to himself. He sheathed his sword and carefully unfolded the letter than Anna had given him before he joined the war effort 6 months ago. He had read it so many times that he could almost recite it by heart. Still, seeing the words that her hand wrote gave him small comfort in the…

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